In class for the past two weeks we have been looking at journalistic writing (being reporters). Can you write the first paragraph for a newspaper report about the school. Imagine that we have found an ancient treasure chest full of gold. Make sure that you use an alliterated title - all of the words beginning with the same letter.
I have done an example for an earthquake - remember you need to do a treasure chest!
My example:
Now you have a go.
Gold glorious gold…..
ReplyDeleteLongfields pupils arrived at school with a big surprise on Monday morning;
Mr. Booth had found a large, rather old looking treasure chest.
Apparently it contains Gold?? But they are unsure as have yet been unable to open the treasure chest. Mr Hill has contacted local locksmiths to attempt to open it up later in the week, so we will keep you updated on the situation.
by lauren norris
Longfield school pupils had found a very
ReplyDeleteshocking dicovery on monday 24th january 2011.
The dicovery was brillant and the dinosaur bones were anicent-like and they look like a real stone.There was a red-purple round thing that looked likean egg and everyone was wondering what the red-purple thing of an egg.
By Kirsty
rich rich rich
ReplyDeleteAs we set of early for school the first Monday morning as the tips of my fingers are half froze to death but not for Mr Booth and Mr Hill as they were ready to find what they wanted... gold so they dug that morning hard for ages suddenly they heard a (BANG)I thing we hit something?and they did but one problem they cant open it they called up specialists to help they managed to open the rusty old treasure chest click smashed the pad lock must of been weak.They gazed in the giant hole staring. Their eyes lit up WOW! there it was in front of them solid gold and coins Mr Booth & Mr Hill was speechless the story is to be continued....
from Jack Dunstan
Golden Glowing Ground!
ReplyDeleteOn the 24th of January 2011 the keystage 2 puipls of Longfields Priamary School Bicester got a shock as there was a hole in the field. The hole was there beacuse the Headmaster Mr Hill had tried to plant a tree as he thought the field was bare. As they were digging they hit something very hard so they made the hole bigger and bigger intill they could see all of the object and they were astonished to find that the objet was a huge chest alleged containg gold.
GOLD GREAT GOLD
ReplyDeleteNobody wanted to be late on the 27th January as at the weekend a mysterious news letter was posted out to,pupils at longfileds primary school bicster.This was all because headteacher,Mr Hill had struck gold!!!Lictrelly!He was digging a hole for the schools new pond and BANG a huge treasure chest met his eyes!With a fabuols amount of gold in it.Detectives are on the case to find out where this ancient gold came from!!!By Nicole Morgan.
Fantastic findings...
ReplyDeleteLongfields primary pupils arrived at school on monday morning only to be struck by a big surprise.
Mr. Booth their caretaker,found a large chest which is said to contain gold. He is unable to open the box until the specialists arrive.
So until that time, all the children can do is wait....
I love this work. Lauren - you got us off to a fantastic start. Kirtsy - I love how you have tried to use a dash, Jack there is some awesone punctuation and Nathan I think the suspense created in yoursa is excellent. Well done
ReplyDeleteGlorious gold discovery
ReplyDeleteOn the first day of the school term at 12:37 pm longfields primary school and nursery made a fantastic discovery.It seems to be a treasure chest, but no one know's what is in side it because the lock is an incrypted puzzle which as yet no'one has been able to solve. Mr Hill (the headmaster) is appealing to any puzzle buffs that may be able to help solve the puzzle to open the chest!
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By Destiny